Chopper charged at the zombie, holding his iron sword with his right hand. He hit the zombie as hard as he could and made it flash red with damage. Even do, the zombie still was able to attack him and knocked him down with its razor-sharp claws, but his armor took most of the damage. He quickly got back up, hit the zombie a few more times, and killed it, dropping some XP. Chopper was proud of himself for killing his first monster, but then he knew he had to be prepared. He saw a large spider sneaking up behind him, then striking. He knew he didn’t have enough energy to kill the spider, and right when it was about to finish him off, about 5 bows hit the spider which killed it. He saw that the arrow came from Planter and he smiled at her.“Thanks” He said.“No time to thank me”.Planter said.“There are still a few more monsters”.Chopper noticed that she was right. He used his bow, fired 3 quick shots at a skeleton and a warrior nearby finished it off. He was surprised it hit the skeleton because of his poor performance when they did aiming in warriors class. Finally, they cleared off the monster and cheered, but the celebration didn’t last long. Out of nowhere, 50 more monsters appeared but before they could attack a voice said: “Not right now you fools! We need more monsters!!!”.Then a zombie yelled: “Retreat!” and that’s what they did. Everyone in the village was relieved as they retreated.“Do you always get attacks like that?”Chopper asked his friends.“No, never” Blaster responded.“It’s like if…”.“They’re trying to destroy our village but this time they like, have someone to lead them?” Herder said.“Yeah, exactly” Blaster said.“It’s pretty suspicious”.“Let’s just ignore it for now and if it keeps on happening then let’s tell fletcher” Planter said.“Yeah, good idea” Chopper said. Then, they walked back home but as Chopper did he saw fletcher moving to him.“Chopper, can I give you a job?” He said.“Sure” Chopper responded.“Could you be the watcher for a bit?” Fletcher asked.“Sure” Chopper responded. He climbed up the ladder watching the horizon.“This is quite boring” He said to himself. He felt like leaving and right before he did, he saw something, which made him stay.“What…is that?” He said. Suddenly he was shivering, and his blood was ice cold. Chopper had found out who was leading the monsters.
Is my story good for now?
somewhat.
=)
k,good to know
Do you have writing tips?
Well on mark cheverton’s website it says writing tips. So go on it to get some
i know but i have already tried that.
Who wants a minecraft story from me
very good story
ok
oh and for people waiting for the next chapter i sent it to Mark
i know but i have already tried that.
Who wants a minecraft story from me
I do
Thanks, I am working on it.