The Spider as King
By Abigail
One day King Endermen went out to the wild and saw a creeper. Then he said, “I’m
stronger than a creeper.” So he wanted to fight and King Endermen came out and tackled
the creeper. So, the creeper had Diamond Armor and the endermen died and the creeper
became the king of the universe. And animals were not happy so they fought until a
spider killed King Creeper and he became king.
The next day, animals make a plan to make a shredder to shred the spider. So then they
went to Post World War III and the plan worked perfectly. So the animals lived happily
ever after.
The End
It’s short simple and sweet. Some feedback try using more descriptive language and transitions will help your writing be even better!!!
I like it